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Post by Eros Raimei on May 8, 2014 11:44:22 GMT -9
EROS RAIMEI [ Age: 17 || Sex: Male || Orientation: Homosexual || Race: Noble ] night class
mannerisms Positive Traits | Negative Traits | ☑ Kind ☑ Loving ☑ Protective ☑ Attractive ☑ Adventurous ☑ Daring | ☒ Short Tempered ☒ Irritable ☒ Argumentative ☒ Disobedient ☒ Aggressive
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history He is the son of a noble family and he is expected a lot of and because of that its given him quite the bad attitude and sarcastic remarks his father puts a lot of preassure on him to do good and that in itself makes him disobedient. He has a kind nature and soft nature sort of due to his mother. His father and mother do NOT despise humans it is just Eros who does. The reason for this is because he witnessed the cruelty of most humans when he has heard of negative things about criminals he does not understand that not all humans are same. His Parents sent him to the academy to learn that humans he despised and thought of as disgusting creatures weren't so bad. They wish for him to learn of the humans better that they are not all the same and only some of the human population like that.
ability specialization He can control Fire (Pyrokinesis)- Eros can take fire from anything like fire places, torches, lighters or matches and make it his own or he can create it with his own hands. Enemies Fire doesn't harm him as he will make it as his own he and control fire to his own needs or situations. But if he is against water he struggles but he rarely wins but he can turn cold water to boiling if it's needed. He gets his power from his Mother as his father is a Earth Controler.
misc. He Dislikes people who try to control others as it reminds him of his father.
He despises all humans why because he finds them weak and greedy and disgusting and evil.
ORIGINAL as eros raimei, played by Xyler |
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Post by Eros Raimei on May 8, 2014 12:05:09 GMT -9
Hi I'm new ^_^ please be patient with me
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Post by ISO.exe on May 8, 2014 13:54:47 GMT -9
PENDING+ You need another positive personality trait
+ I'd like maybe a little bit more information in his history? Like if his parents also believe that humans are beneath them, or if that just Ero's opinion. And what you mean by 'do good'. Like do good as in be polite and respectful? Perhaps add how or why he began to despise humans, which would help add insight to what his views are also. As it is now it's too vague.
+ The ability also needs to be more fleshed out. Describe what he can do with his fire manipulation a bit, and incorporate what limitations he has. This is the most important part so if you need to ask questions feel free.
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